Scar passed acres
Of fruit
Ripeness booming
Flowers and fruit
The roar of the bees
He looked around
All he could see
Was a dark canopy
I like the way you put the words together! It makes alot of sense. Good job!
I like how it ryhmes at the end and it does make sense. It's really good.
I like the way you put the words together! It makes alot of sense. Good job!
ReplyDeleteI like how it ryhmes at the end and it does make sense. It's really good.
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